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Foreverlasting love


I leaned heavily against the wall
Breathing shallowly
My chest heaving

My body anxiously waiting

Although my mind don't know what

His firm lips kissing the line of my jaw

And nibbling my ears

But my lips is waiting to be one with yours

His large hands skimping my body

Bring my curves to his firm body

My breast are tingling as his hand lightly swept pass there

His other hand swept around the curve of my bottom

To touch the insides of my thigh

I jerked with surprise as blood went up to my head

I felt his smile

But I couldn't take it anymore

I pulled his head down with barely restrained need

When our lips touched and tongues tangled

I couldn't get your taste out of my head

It was intoxicating

And I couldn't get enough

On that wall then and there

We made love

It was my first and you're my last

Forever you would be my everlasting love

 

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  • this was pretty cool here you handled yourself erotically i think good luck to you in the contest