what does the viscosity of undulated squash,
have to do with the number of stars in the galaxy,
craters in the moon and scars on my heart?
and what does the sunset on the city horizon
have to do with the smell of blossom in the evening
or the taste of peppermint on a boys lips?
and how does a hummingbird relate to a hyacinth in bloom,
or the echo of the wind in a poppy field
the reciprocated feelings, between two quivering minds?
how does the bloom of a rose
and the chattering of teeth
relate to you and me?
"the answer my darling
is in the sparkle of your eyes
the dancing of your fingertips
and the spiraling of your hair.
The answer is the electricity between us
the joining of two parallel worlds
and the explosion of emotions
the answer is love"
I wear a secret smile
and whisper tenderly in your ear
"your talking crap again baby"
you smile and wrap your arms around me
"one day, you'll understand"
Author notes
charley helped me with the title, and the poem was based on him and his ectasy, even though its crap
but mainly based on me and my <3
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Lovelt Mate
this is a great poem i love it again not crap really good quit doubting yourself and embrace the goddes within you it's there you might not see it now but it's there ok great write and love em -
ecstasy's contribution
Ok, I want to be a part of this discussion.
First of all: OHMYGOSH HOLLIE DON'T YOU EVER TELL ME YOU CAN'T WRITE AGAIN, THIS IS AMAZING!!
I didn't know what to expect when I read this but...I just don't know what to say, it's perfect for us...and it makes me realise...stuff. ♥
"the answer my darling
is in the sparkle of your eyes
the dancing of your fingertips
and the spiraling of your hair."
^ that was my favourite bit, it is unbelievably beautiful. I just...don't know what to say.
Message me my dear and explain every little bit.
Including all the maddness below this.
I love you Hollie and I am so honoured to be a little part of this amazing poem.
Thank you.
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i donna wanna be associated with the poem cos its so beautiful, but i suits my esctacy,
love ya hollie,
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too bad, your on the notes so your assoiciated
suck it bitch
love you
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nopes cos im invisable,
end of!
ok, im scared for her posty now as well,
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haha this is weird now, all your messages are in differnt places, fun when you read the conversation downwards becuase it doesnt make sense
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haha i like messing wih peoples minds! people who will read this will be like "ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh im afriad of postmen, no im not, ahhhhhhh i am."
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just done be scared kay, we'll protect you
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hmmmm, hmmmm it could be a different charley and thats not my real name, sooooooo
no im not.
figure that one out , and on ya bike!
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well... then can just read theese comments and they'd figure out it was you so hah!
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aha it wouldnt let me reply to the other one below.
no i didnt, i jus sed they wont know its me,
yesh, indeed, they wont, not at all.
and she probs will read this, and no i dont stalk ya, and wtf. postmen???
hollie im worried for the postmen you have, and the milk man!
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wierdness
and you said they wasnt clever enough to know it wass you or something.
and if she reads this, she must type something
and erm, inside joke bvetween us
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nopes people are not clever enough and besides im invisible! (aha sorry people)
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you just insulted my peoples
not that many people read my poems but oh wells
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and omg if abi is reading this... he's like the invisable postmen, although I dont think you'd mind him stalking you
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