Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Tempest

Tempest


Winds blow from a far,
the sea rises,
the waves crash mercilessly
on the resisting rocks.

Angry rain falls,
thunder roars,
lightning disturbs
the black burning sky.

A furious tempest
is upon us!



By: Nada Adel Sobhi

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • The Fun House silver member
    March 21

    Edit | Reply
    I feel her mighty roar as she approaches. No discrimination...if you are in the way; you won't be soon enough Well done!


  • suseann
    February 23

    Edit | Reply
    Nicely done Poetess! Seering color choices used in word form and text/background. Tempest is a favorite word of my own too.

  • raelaxdarkmoon
    February 23

    Edit | Reply
    wow such description of a deadly storm a tempest is very dangerous and i think you've described it perfectly.