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My nightmare

People come, people go
It’s her life she’ll never know
Way too young, under ground
Never to be seen or found
Stolen from her nice warm bed
Won’t see her until she’s dead
Candy was there for the lure
But death is something you can’t cure
Only 4 of years
Eyes stinging with the tears
Death grip on her bear for security
She’ll never reach maturity
Trying hard to scream and shout
Only to get hit, she fades in and out
Body hurts pain stabs in tiny pins
Out of the dark the evil man grins
Can’t tell the time of day
She only wants to get away
At the age of 4 she gets raped
The twisted man has his conquest on tape
Body battered and bruised
She’s only there to be used
Tired she starts to cry
Knowing when he’s done she’ll die
This is a battle she’ll lose
Only to be on tomorrow’s news
Serial rapist got away
Now there’s an attack a day
Her body discarded, starting to wither
Found a week later in the river
Another screams into the night
Tears clouding her line of sight
Chilling wind blowing cold
She’s another 4 year old
This little one is only a pawn
Passes out too much blood gone
Knowing if she survives she’ll never be the same
Evil man cuts to maim
Up against the wall a little body chained up
He takes her blood cup by cup
Slowly dying, miraculous hue
Her body turns blue
A trophy her body to keep
In her last breaths she cries and weeps
She body shudders its last cries
For now here she dies
Outside the light fades away
Here he comes out to play
Two bodies floating side by side
All the little girls better run and hide

Author notes

some things never go away and these are very frequent nightmares. having a broken and messed up child hood really sux

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  • hend shaheen
    September 5

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    thats really dark I bet any person reading this would have nightmares for a while....really painful...some people can be more than beasrs....i also love your smooth rhyme....good luck!!!


  • AbidoodleCullen
    August 31

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    *shudders* I won't sleep tonight...
    Thanks for entering and good luck!
    Abi


  • Dearly Beloved...
    August 29
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    Intence

    You rally cpatured something vial and dark.
    This was asboer interesting write thank you for entering


  • SpeakLove93
    April 15
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    Dark

    This is a very dark and yet very fantastic write. Such a disgusting thing it is. Its something that needs to put to an end. This piece shows exactly why. Very nicely done. You described the evil of it without getting to graphic. You did a very nice job and thank you for entering!


  • Re-invention silver member
    March 4
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    very dark... lovely hunni thanks for sharing reminded me of old scary movies... great job!


  • pinksnowboots
    March 3
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    What prompt is this for? Please put it in your AN so I know!


  • Loki silver member
    March 1

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    Tragically sad. I do like the rhyme scheme, but lack of a meter. I think it works well in this piece.

    Thank you for entering and best of luck.

    -Løki


  • stargardt13
    February 25

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    wow i'm so sorry yo had to experience any of this. It was like a csi or law and order in a poem. I defintily have to say this is the creepest poem i have ever read, but the best creepy one too. It was very disheartening.


  • irdefk
    February 25
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    scary. thanx for entering
    ~Kiwi


  • Winged Unicorn
    February 24
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    wow

    this is a well written poem filled with haunting heartfelt emotion. You wrote about such a horrible topic with brilliant imagery. I can't even imagine how anyone could do something so horrible. It is beyond me but you captured the victims point of view well. Interesting read


  • dustytiger
    February 24

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    wow this is really dark and sad, but still an amazing poem, full of rhyme and with a lot flow, scary stuff this world we live in, best of luck in the contest

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