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tonight what i will do

tonight i will dream of your eyes

i will long for their blue
i will wish for your lashes tickle
i will see you blink, long over due

tonight i will kiss your smile

i will slide in close
i will steal your lips
i will beg for another dose

tonight i will heal your bones

i will bless them with heart
i will grace them with hands
i will cry over beauty, your art

tonight i will reach for your soul

i will curl up in your mind
i willl make nest in your ribs
i will caress what i find

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i just think it.

don't you want to start the night this way?

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  • ApollosMuse
    March 23

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    so sensual and beautiful and just expressive of that tenderness you share with a person...let me know how everything is going...i always love to hear from you!!


  • dabpunx
    March 10
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    sounds good. what a good girl this is so beautiful.

  • this is really sweet!


  • The Cube
    February 24

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    It's strang. Before when I first knew you, most of your work was about sex, not so much love, but now that you are with someone else, it seems that your genre in writing has changed. Nothing bad, just something I'm noticing. Great work.


  • Lonely Christina
    February 23
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    beautiful
    amazing job


  • Laughing Buddh
    February 23
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    nice

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