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I am beloved

Speaking so softly
Whispering
Waiting
Wanting

All under a sad faced moon
Where you cried wolf
Tears dripping into my fur
As the fey folk hummed a lonely tune

Something woeful this way seeks
the widowed old washer woman
Remembering old dreams while washing
Hollow regrets falling with bitter tears
Looking in vain amongst the watercress and leeks

She did not see us go
Washing and washing as the sun rose
and the day grew hotter
Dreaming lonely dreams on the banks of the river
As the wolf left with her daughter

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  • Like a Fairy Tale.

    I loved the imagery in this poem. The old washer woman...the images and the sad moon. What a wonderful write. It kinda reminded me of a Fairy Tale. I loved this one!

    Bravo!
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  • Heroesrox
    February 23

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    Something woeful this way seeks
    the widowed old washer woman
    Remembering old dreams while washing
    Hollow regrets falling with bitter tears
    Looking in vain amongst the watercress and leeks

    My most favorite part of the whole thing. I really liked this one a lot! Thanks so much for entering!


  • raw love
    February 23

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    oh for sad.
    ...and when I'm feeling lonely too.