The beautiful tiger
As pretty as seen
A heart-warming girl
You have ever, ever seen
In the deadly trees
Were there’s dead flowers
And the deadly breeze
Miss tiger has superpowers
She makes everything
Full of happy joy
Her sweet voice sings
The darkness she does destroy
She has orange and black stripes
And when she touches fruit
They become shiny and ripe
She can fly with orange wings
And can grow lovely things
Her smile is so great, you see
You would defiantly agree
She is the adventurous one
And she makes boring things fun
She is smart and so true
She is kind for me and you
She makes that cloudy sky
Sunny and blue
Her strongest power
It will make you cry
And say awww
A power to make you die
It’s when she gives you a hug
You can't resist to adore
Your life will turn to
Be happier than before
So you see, Miss Tiger
She’s a beautiful tiger
With incredible powers
And a beautiful smile
And a joyful giggle
So now give her a great big tickle!
Author notes
I'm 11 years old.
A contest entry
- last few hours to enter by honey bear.
650 points, ended February 27, 2009, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think?
Comments
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Very enjoyable write! What a fun read this is. Good luck!
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Awesome poem, very enjoyable.
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Very imaginative write and I really liked the Tiger tho not enough to give it a cuddle! Well done Lana, I wonder who the Tiger was based on... Tammy?
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Lol
it was based on this litle girl whos like 6 years old and there is 3month silver membership who ever wins.!
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a very delightful read and very good for your age group, good luck in the contest with this very sweet and descriptive write, you have put a lot of thought into making it like a story , good work
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You're 11 and you already write like this? OK I'm scared - you're scarily good at this! It was brilliantly written and I hope it wins!
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Thankyou
im very glad you liked it
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