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Mirror, Mirror

this mirror!

it dose not speak
            the truth

it tells me-
                  I'm old?

when the child,
inside me...
            is cause for,
                        my dispute



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my profound poetry

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 23

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    Whoa ! you sure had to re look in the mirror..
    our youth is usually hidden and sneaks out when we least expect it...lol nicely done...good luck in the contest
    mm


  • suseann
    February 23
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    Mirrored reflections can be decieving.They are "in the moment" only. And can hide a lot too.


    • Malabu
      February 23
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      they do fail to see deeper than the shell...still, we ponder our existance


  • Naughtygrlred
    February 23
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    my mirror tells me i am the fairest of them all...lol!

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