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P.a.I.N. & H.U.N.G.E.R

Pain always with me

Always i looked for the wrong in me ,

It never was enough 5 pounds 10 pounds,

"No food,no fat " So less i ate and more I puked

 

Hate, for myself,for my shape...

Under weight to be "cool"...

Never even taking one bite...

Going out of control...

Everything was wrong...

Ready I was to get help!

 

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This is amodern problem we need to fix!

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  • Lowell Poe
    February 25

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    oh lass....
    So glad the help was there.
    Always love yourself little gypsy.
    Great expression and articulately stated.

    Peace,
    Lowell


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    February 23

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    I agree. This is problem that needs to be fixed. But addressed as well. It seems to be that it's on of those problems that far too often just gets swept under the rug