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the guiding voice

look passed the bloodshot eye and itching ears
look through the multicolored smoke
reach passed the orbs of light
reach through the acrobatic air
listen beyond the sighs  and moans
listen close to the howling transformation
taste beyond the bitter drain
taste closely at the sweetness
feel more then just your body melting
feel free to ignore what i say
feel free to just float away

Author notes

if you have ever been the baby sitter for people tripping face, these are the kind of crazy thing you say to them. lol

have you ever heard this?

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  • Magik Milk Glass
    April 15
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    oh my this brings back such memories haha i like it very much welll done


  • The Cube
    February 24

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    I havn't been a babysitter except for my sister, but the poem, if thought about in other ways, is really good. I'm probably not thinking in the same sense that you were when writing it, but oh well.