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[Anticipation Of Your Quest]

Sorry, Trying to use big words.
Maybe, I would like to be your super awesome daugher

What parts would youuu change *rainbow* :]

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    February 23, 2009

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    In my daughter's eyes I am a hero
    I am strong and wise and I know no fear
    But the truth is plain to see
    She was sent to rescue me
    I see who I wanna be
    In my daughter's eyes

    In my daughter's eyes everyone is equal
    Darkness turns to light and the
    world is at peace
    This miracle God gave to me gives me
    strength when I am weak
    I find reason to believe
    In my daughter's eyes

    In My Daughters Eyes Lyrics by Martina McBride

    Good Luck!