Gliding past the Milky Way on my way to nowhere
Venus and Mars holding hands with love upon their eyes
Sailing past the black hole as it turns within itself there
Following the comet of friendship with all its sighs
Onward to the outer realms of our single trip
Where the universe opens up all those true wonders
I am here smiling aboard my personal ship
Watching the light show the causes my heart's thunder
Then I am brought back to this life of reality
Where on Earth I am stuck within heavy gravity
Author notes
Flying through the Cosmos
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie #1 by islekine.
460 points, ended March 1, 2009, 10 entries
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Comments
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Lovely write!
past...not pass...in both lines...
Best wishes in the contest, and always!
Write on!
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This was beautiful!
Great job!
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