I'm sitting here thinking about you
like I do everyday.
I'm trying to concentrate,
but these fantasies of you,
hold me at bay.
I'm imagining how great it would be
if you give yourself to me.
I vow that I would willingly drown in this sea of ecstacy.
I can feel your body pressed into mine,
caught in a tempest of fire,
enraptured by true love that's so divine.
I can feel your kisses on my neck,
and the play of your fingers upon my chest,
and I'm enchanted by the spell that you cast best.
I can hear your sighs and the urgent beating of your heart,
and I become undone,
while in my fantasies so steamy and hot,
we become one.
A contest entry
- Be Creative by MichaelSavage.
700 points, ended February 27, 14 entries
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Comments
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Good poem...but my rules are no Rhyme....so you might want to do some revise on it?? Just a thought. Good luck in the contest.
Michael -
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ws nt trying to rhyme the poem actually....bt it just did.....cause d words were comin in flow like d water flows in d river......will try to revise....tnx for d comment
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