Secret smile, covert glance,
Sneak a kiss at every chance.
A wink, a laugh, a light caress,
all show the things we can't confess.
Casual greetings, late night moans,
Your lips on mine when we're alone.
A comment that leaves more unsaid,
and hints at time spent in your bed.
We lie together, intertwined,
sending tingles up my spine.
You'll return to her come light,
But as of now, you're mine tonight.
Author notes
Edited the last stanza slightly from the original to make the meaning more clear.
A contest entry
- Rhyme Me Something ADULTEROUS **PW by AlittleWrong.
5000 points, ended February 27, 2009, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
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beautiful and enchanting.
i love this! 3 short stanzas and delicately written. ending was superb, wasn't what i was expecting but great. thank you for entering and good luck.
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this is powerful and really amazin w/ ur word choice. no wonder y u graduated.. ur a great poet
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This came out feeling like adultery, which I suppose is what you were going for, based solely on your title. I liked this piece. It was well worded. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.
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I LOVE YOURPOETRY
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This is deliciously good, a real treat for this word junkie
Excellent meter, perfect rhyme, just a very well crafted piece of art
Bravo
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i love it!!
haha..
great write.
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Absolutely wonderful. Realistically, that's all my comments needs to say.
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outstanding
this is wonderful!!! i love love love love love it. very much. welcome to the finalist list! The meter, rhyme, and cheeky take on the subject matter were all a pleasure to read. it also captured exactly how the situation was that i was in.
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Your rhythm makes this poem so playful and amusing. The cuteness of it cleverly paints over the dark intentions of the narration. Smart!
The last line especially hits the ball outta the park. Nice way to tie up what was almost such a seemingly-casual write.
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