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Peace

Each day
I sit

in my cage
of sorrow

and
dream of
flyng free

tomorrow.

I know soon
my wings will heal

And I will

spread them
once again.

Although for now
I rest,

savouring
my every breath.

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  • Shantti silver member
    May 2, 2009

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    I hope you sit in peace my friend
    Very lovely. We all must take time to savor each breath now and then.
    Thank you for your entry here


  • delightfulmess silver member
    April 14, 2009

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    Rest is just as important as anything else, and we should savour it when we can get it.
    This is lovely.


    Delila


  • fantasysmurf
    February 23, 2009

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    When we are brave

    We work our way toward the sky. Sometimes we can fly forever. Sometimes we get blown off course, but dont give up trying. All it takes is determination to try again, and preparing ourselves to do better. Nice poem, Shortyjo


  • InTheAttic
    February 23, 2009
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    i think of a little bird resting on a branch. very cute!

    kAsSiE


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    February 23, 2009

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    Very hopeful for a day of freedom
    and healing. I love the contents of this one.
    Well done and thanks for sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826

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