Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

and then she said hello

a lonely, cold night
had found its way to me
as the harsh rain fell outside

bundled in blankets
i sat alone
wishing there was somebody to sit beside me
or at least to talk to

... and then you came to me

... and you said hello

i've found my smile again

Author notes

just something that came to me. i was sitting here for half an hour with nothing to write... and then she said hello =D

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 10 of 10

  • jul
    May 3
    Edit | Reply
    how sweet! i've felt that way more than once. best wishes to u now and always!!

  • o my goodness! this is such a cute poem. i love it.

  • awwwww. thats so cute!!


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    February 23

    Edit | Reply

    awwwe Kevin I am sorry

    I didnt say hello sooner this is precious my friend!well done!

    Blessngs

    Rend


  • going nowhere
    February 23
    Edit | Reply
    this was soooo sweet. it was like.. i just want to say awwww when im done reading it.


  • Ken-Maverick
    February 23

    Edit | Reply
    This is one shaweet write my friend,
    I even smiled with you after reading the end,
    she a lucky girl indeed, all the best to you

    Ken

1 - 10 of 10