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The Carney Song in my Dream Last Night

Because of the Crusaders, because of the Tomcats
because of the waves on the air the Sirens
beckon me towards the sun and the sea. With my
waxen wings, I'll fly to the hot
                                          wet
                                          clouds
                                          and let go the poles to the
                                              carnival's tent.
    Carneys with washed-white faces and
      half smoked cigarettes between their
      teeth entice the youth with
      their words and their wigs-
                splitting the journey in two
                unequal songs-

One a poem
the other a dance.

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