Do you see where it goes?
I surely do not!
What is the fascination?
I know it was there,
and then it was not;
Such a complex situation!
They use this strange thing,
like a litter box I think,
then they push the silver contraption.
With a big roaring sound
that makes me skitter
enigma is a fitting caption!
For I know it goes down
through a hole that it has
and I know I cannot be outrun
Yet look as I might
I cannot see its end
this has me all undone!
Author notes
when I get a silver or gold week I will surely add the wonderful pic that inspired this and without which it makes little to no sense, my apologies! Please, go to the contest to see it, I will leave it in here until I can do so!
A contest entry
- Looking For Laughs by JeannieD Hunter.
600 points, ended February 24, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hehe haha this was soooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! greeeeat work!!!!!!!!!!!!
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LOL, "what a funny write perfect for the prompt. Good luck in the contest. God Bless,Jo-Ann
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I get it.
You have been tagged and well my husband had a cat that would use the comode and flush it with his paws. This is pretty interesting.
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I'm afraid our cats drinks from the loo... we have to keep the bathroom door firmly shut!
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Oh what a very funny poem it goes so well with the pic provided in the contest. Thanks for giving me a smile this morning I needed it. Wonderful and vivid imagery. I so enjoyed reading, have a blessed day and I hope being tagged will bring a smile to your face. Hugs Theresa
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LMAO!!! Smart cats, thinks to look outside to see where the..um..'litter' goes! Great take on the prompt. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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