I'm
A top
I spin
Around
And around
Clockwise
Finally
Tired
Fall
Do
I
Author notes
Toy shape.
Written February 23rd, 2004
A contest entry
- Show me how it's done by Lakota.
300 points, ended March 9, 2004, 13 entries
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Excellent poem good luck
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The top looks Great, I will spin it around and stare mesmerized into it just like I did as a kid.
Thanks for entering My contes
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Wonderful top..all the best!
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I like the top shape. Thank you for entering the contest and good luck.
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Bringing back some nice memories spinning tops and children playing in a more innocent time...i do appreciate shape poetry nicely presented. Good luck in the contest.
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Hehe I like this a lot. Great shape poetry! Very well done
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I was obessed with a spinning top when I was a kid lol
Good Luck
Lakota x -
Very good was it hard for you to do??? hehe your so brillant
Hugs,Sherry
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