To lie in bed with wistful thought,
consumed by fear the rain has brought.
In agile mind my thoughts do fray,
unravel on a rainy day.
For distant thunder clouds my brain.
with morning will the storm remain?
Will clear skies clear my mind as well,
or darkness be what dreams foretell?
Dashing fears with simple pleasure,
fright engulfs each raindrop's leisure.
My demons taken all in stride,
they lurk and stalk deep inside.
Sail upon the whispered motion,
dragons fly above the ocean.
Sententious thoughts to be set free,
as rain falls on the willow tree.
So eager for the sun I seek,
behind the clouds, will sunshine peek.
Where dragons are but only flies,
dash and dart throughout blue skies.
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The picture that you posted with this poem made me wish I was in a skiff floating near all the beauty of your words. Take care and as the guy said "I'll be back."
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Good Morning Papagallo
Thank you for the nice comment. I so appreciate it. Hope you have a wonderful Sunday. You take care, Sandy
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Your Words
flow effortlessly throughout. Your imagery and metaphorical use is absolutely stunning. Keep up the great work, my friend.
Niaish for sharing
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Silent Hawk
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So eager for the sun I seek,
behind the clouds, will sunshine peek.
Where dragons are but only flies,
dash and dart throughout blue skies.
Aw.. I loved this write as a whole, but when I got to the very end I could see a picture as clear as day in my head. I love it!
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Good Morning
Such a lovely comment you have written. Thank you for reading. Always appreciated. Take care. Hugs, Sandy
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Just beautiful Sandy.
Love the imagery...
"Sail upon the whispered motion"
Your emotion is beautifully expressed in this poem.
What an excellent title.
Love the pic too.
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Good Morning Jesaan
So glad you stopped by to read and enjoyed my poem. Thank you for the very nice comment. Take care. Hugs and Smiles, Sandy
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This is exquisite.
Like much of your works, the flow is simply elegant and so easy to read.
Amazing imagery here
Shari
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Thank You
You lovely comment is most appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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Another one of your wonderful nature writes Sandy. A very pretty painting that goes with it too. Both so well complementary to the other. Sheila
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Thank You Shelia
Your comment is so nice. I am glad you enjoyed. You take care. Sandy
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Very nicely written Sandy. I love softly falling rain, as long as I am inside. I like your used of it on the willow tree. The pic goes nicely with your poem.
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Good Morning Katie
Thank you for this lovely comment. It is always appreciated when you stop by and read. You take care.
Blessing My Friend, Sandy
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This is a beautiful poem, so well written, tis truly magic, love and blessings John
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Good Morning My Friend
John, Thank you for reading and commenting. Hugs and smiles for you this morning. You do make it a brighter day.
Love and Blessings,
Sandy
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This is so beautiful. I loved the imagery that is in it. The words just really make it come to life and it's as if I am looking at a painting, and someone is reading this to me. Well done.
Niaish Ma Eno from all Your Children is leaving some love on your page this week...
Kari
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Thank You
I appreciate you reading and commenting. Take care, Sandy
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Such a beautiful poem! It was such a wonderful thing to read first thing in the morning. It put a smile on my face. "Sail upon the whispered motion,
dragons fly above the ocean.
Sententious thoughts to be set free,
as rain falls on the willow tree."<-- that was my favorite stanza. Keep up the amazing work.
love, your Ap daughter,
~*~ A Poet's Life For Me~*~
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Good Morning
Thank you for this lovely comment dear daughter. Always nice to have you stop by. Hugs and smiles, Love, Mom
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What lovely thoughts with the snow falling down out side
Bless you for the cheerful thoughts when the weather is cccoooolllddddd --10-------- outside. This trip can flurt with the mind and let warm things os the summer gone past slip in. Thanks for more pleasent dreams...mac
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HELLO SWEET FRIEND
You always make me smile when you comment. Thank you for that. I hope it warms up soon for both of us. Sending you some big yellow sun to warm you up. You take care. Big hugs and Smiles.
Peace and Grace,
Sandy
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This is a beautiful piece of work, an the rhyem is wonderful. dragon fly above the ocean, caught my eye. Very much a pleasure to read.
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Lovely Comment
Thank you for the nice comment. It is appreciated. You take care. Sandy
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The melody of this piece is as beautiful as the words that produced it Excellent a joy to this readers eyes
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Thank You
Always a pleasure to have you read my poetry my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment Hope all is well over there. Spring is on its way. 
You take care. Hugs and Smiles, Sandy
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Beautiful words here. I like what you did with dragon fly and dragons are but inly flies. Great words for some thought. Take care and bless you. Papagallo
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Thank you my friend
This was a lovely comment. Thank you for reading. It is appreciated. Hugs.
Blessings,
Sandy
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God morning Papagallo
Hope this day finds you well. Thank you for the lovely comment. Always nice when you stop by. You take care. Hugs. Bless You, Sandy
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woow, a nice natural and smart poem. its realistic. I really like it. like;
"Sententious thoughts to be set free,"
Thanks for sharing this with us.
Great write poet.
Always be happy
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Hello Hamid
Thank you for reading my poem and commenting. It is most appreciated. You take care, Sandy
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