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Abdom Mort

I want to touch the universe,
      and make the sun fall

likeIcarusdid

elihw
i
tup
eht
noom
otni
ym
htuom

where did I die
and leave my eyes?

did I smile before I fell?

did anyone
take

pictures?

I fit my life into a shot glass

                        before I passed away
and whispered            secrets[hushed]
into the ears of children,
telling them that death

comes with a bulging stomach.

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BoxofShadows

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