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a lone black crow caws on my roof and if I

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


throw words

into the wind

would you catch the drift?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • HereComesTheSun
    February 24, 2009

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    ohh i like this alot becuase i really grabs the reader with the question, i would never have thought of that saying and taking in the way you did. very creative and very very well done mucho talent you have (ha im a jedi :] )


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    February 23, 2009
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    Oh, I love this! who the hell got gold? what could be better than this...lol.

    well done


  • Jersene gold member
    February 23, 2009
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    love it! short, but with impact


  • fortyninereasons
    February 23, 2009

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    crow poop.... how did I miss this one???
    Congrats on the HM.
    Juls


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    February 23, 2009

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    HM
    This is just amazing!. The words fall wherever they land in our hearts. Different drift for different people.
    Just beautiful.
    Gaylene


  • chloris
    February 23, 2009
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    lol... i guess not if he is stupid enough not to care!


  • Cannonsfire
    February 22, 2009
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    Lachaim C


  • notorious gold member
    February 22, 2009
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    How many synonyms for 'clever'?


  • Xianaria gold member
    February 22, 2009
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    Nice way to add more words
    Best wishes!


  • thepoetssoul
    February 22, 2009

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    Very clever penning indeed
    Brilliant write, nice title
    Be blessed in all you do.

    Tony


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 22, 2009
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    NICE TAKE!!!!
    Really enjoyed this one best of luck


    Delila


  • islekine
    February 22, 2009

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    I am going to have a hard time

    judging this contest! Many great entries...love yours!
    Thanks for playing!!!
    Best wishes in the contest and always...write on!


  • bw43
    February 22, 2009
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    i like all your stuff... it all seems so meaningful always


    • charcoal
      February 22, 2009

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      naah you're just saying that because i threatened to self immolate

      • bw43
        February 22, 2009
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        LoLoL..... aww shucks you caught me LoL (kidding)


  • redbarchettadrive gold member
    February 22, 2009
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    Very cool!


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    February 22, 2009
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    Ha I love it. Great write!

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