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In my Dreams

To see her in my dreams,
that golden girl of yesterday
In love now more than thirty years,
I chased her far away

She was only true of heart,
honest, smart, and free
Deserving of so much more than me,
with a lackluster pedigree

Gone she’s been for thirty years,
in my chest there’s still a flame
Through a marriage and relationships,
she still wins my acclaim

I have loved her through the ages,
and I love her ever still
Not deserving of her loyalty,
her thought gives me a thrill

To look into her big brown eyes,
would melt me yet today
An anchor I would have been to her
so I chased her far away

The scar I bear is shattered love,
for I have not been whole
The piece of me she’s kept since then,
has  lessened  my control

To give my all to anyone,
I’m doomed right from the start
Renea you still hold in your grasp,
a large piece of my heart

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  • Rhapsody
    March 10
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    I love it. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.


  • penman gold member
    March 9
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well done. A great expression. Best of luck in the contest.


  • GizmoFox
    February 23
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    How sweet... Nice job Boog.

    Regards,
    G.F.