Little yellow dandelion
glowing in my hands
bright like the sun
without burning
my tenderly cupped fingers
I feel like I am
holding your smile
when you look at me
so I bend over
and kiss the sunny petals
Author notes
Dandelions are considered a weed, but I love them, they make my heart warm.
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aww this is cute. thanks for entering and good luck in the contest
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Aww, this was very original
& beautiful indeed.
Lovely thoughts of nature
in a subtly sensual way.
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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Awww this was cute.
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Nice and pleasant, Not cliche lovey-dovey. I like it.
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I agree entirely that dandelions are lovely!
I find them bright and cheery. I enjoyed the last stanza, especially "I feel like I am
holding your smile." Very pretty!
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this is short and sweet but... i like it. it's just so cute! "I feel like I am holding your smile"
nothing unnecessary- no extra lines.
thanks for entering,
-cassidy
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This is not over fifteen lines.
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