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Breathing Light Beyond

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Breathing Light Beyond

 

Poignant pose in poised portrait,

sketched by silent pond

Poetic justice rhymes await,

breathing light beyond.

 

Seed to stem by strength of stream,

sipping drops divine

Life blossoms in feathered dream,

once upon a time.

 

Questions lay within a quest,

petals pink respond

Morning dew on wisdom’s nest,

breathing light beyond.

Author notes

Pic Prompt: Option 7

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  • PerfectImperfection
    February 25

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    Very very nice!!! There is a perfect meter here from the read, very smooth and so well composed! Great use of imagery to alight the thoughts within!! Well penned!


  • Stardust-luvr
    February 25

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    well done my dear heart and as a tear spills from my eye know I needed your words of love and hope more than you can express. You are my true guiding light breathing peace in my soul when I need it . I just wish I could do more for your own peace. well done and many blessings with love always xxxxx


  • jasminerose
    February 24

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    Simply put... soft, beautiful and most eloquent dear brother..
    Love the feeling this leaves within the heart!
    A treausreable piece you have shared!
    Jazzy


  • Jalalbad gold member
    February 23

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    life blossoms in a feathered dream. Very poetic these feathered fouls will just love it!
    Good luck in the contest sweet swollow.


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 23
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    Beautiful and eloquently written. Such grace and splendor.


  • Titus gold member
    February 23

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    Phrase of word here, is about 7 syllables, even five, I bet you'd be good at haiku, I've tried, but unless it is 9-12 syallbles, I'm in awarp, I have an abstract mind so you'd think so wouldn't you, but heh! this is great stuff, almost, as nature intended.


  • Lonely
    February 23

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    You always put new thoughts in my mind to ponder upon, and I often get inspired for my paintings from your words.. they are more than lively paintings to me.. sketched by silent pond.. Just wow! My I really am a big fan of yours!!

    Love ya!
    Lonely


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    February 23

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    What a beautiful picture. 6 through 9 and 11th line jumpe out at me. This is a beautiful poem. Very much a pleasure to read.


  • StarEyes
    February 23

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    If this isn't just about the most beautiful, romantic piece I have ever read than I don't know what is! This truly beautiful. And some of those lines, reminds me of just what I needed to hear... Thanks for that.

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Angelflower
    February 22

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    this was so beautiful... Such a soft piece of you in these words.. You have such a soft touch when it comes to sweet words.. I truly enjoyed reading this baby boy.. you did a wonderful job.. best of luck in the contest.

    Angel

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