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Useless Thoughts

This means nothing

when it all falls too close to the ending

of what was something incredibly stupid.

Step into reality and look around

Honey this world isn’t big enough

So step back and fall back

Into the lies you created

To hang yourself

Spiders web already spun

So tightly into the foundation of this house

It makes everything seem so much more

When the lights fade into the background

Light up the dark night

With your white lies

The shine bright

Honey this life just isn’t big enough

So step out into the dark,

Fade away into the night

Stay where you belong

In the midst of every mess

With a smile on your face

Please tell me what you think

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  • Copy
    May 10
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    I'll eat yo face spider womann

    dear nattie poo,
    this definitely reminds me of giving advice to someone who is lost, and trying to tell them to just learn to smile about it, it's organized perfectly, it draws a picture of a personal conflict, and then solves it in the end. Lovey lovely loving piece of loveish work. ;D


  • Leela
    February 23
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    i love it. the last lines are great especially and i love the tone you take through out. nice job