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Blaze

The fire within my mind
it burns
and this fire is nothing more than

--Anger--

This blaze must be put out
but instead it
grows stronger

What do you think? Anything I can work on?

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  • Deathless1
    March 16

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    we all have those flames in our hearts and minds.

    the hate we can't shake.

    well done, short and to the point.

    i loved the flow.