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Insomnia Continues

I cannnot bear this pain,
yet all night I lie
awake and
    My
      Monsters
        Return

I intend to sleep and yet...
    I
      Am
        Eaten
          Alive

And within my
shattered mind...
    My
    Insomnia
      Continues

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True I suppose...

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