Dance of the silver clouds,
creative, avant-garde;
ancient theater
of the blue stage.
A contest entry
- Short Nature Poems (no formed verses) by misticmoonlite.
850 points, ended February 28, 2009, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Bravo.
I loved it.
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Thank you, sweetheart
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Outstanding
This made me think of clouds drifting across a blue expanse of sky - something I can never tire of watching. I liked your choice of language and the way you developed the theme. Best of luck in the contest.
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Wonderful and so true.. We all have free admittance to the greatest shows on Earth, if we but look up!
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very nice,like the set up in this piece, thank you for sharing this entry, good luck in my contest
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Ah....and what is more free
than avante garde clouds?
A perfect capture of an image, a thought.
M-C
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Thank you
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