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Airdead

home all day
cant stay away
its everywhere
cant find a way out
i just want to shout
this drug gets under my skin
every day poisining my veins
give it a rest
got to get out
away from that sweet small that makes you feel discusted
the only way out is to leave the earth
i dont care if it hurts
just thnk to my self
"got to get out" "got to get out"

finaly i find a way out
i get up high and smell the sweet clean air one last time
i notice it is not poisend like the other one
then i fall wind in my face.......
still falling waitting for it to end
then atlast its over
and i relize im dead

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    February 23
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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    Drugs are pointless. They are not helpful and they destroy lives.

    There are a lot of spelling errors in this, I would suggest using a spell check.

    Welcome to Allpoetry
    I hope that you enjoy the site, and if you have any questions please don't hesitate to ask

    Good job, keep writing!


  • PsychoAnalysis
    February 22

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    I would like to say first of all, welcome to AP. This poem is really good. Emotional, powerful. Great job