Sitting here
Wishing I would disappear
I don’t belong here
I’m different from everybody
It’s weird, sometimes I feel alone
Like nobody loves me or nobody cares
But they can’t see the scars I’m hiding
They’re deep inside and damn I’m crying
As the days go by, I’m still trying
The blood on my wrist is finally drying
I’m scared to death
Heart pounding out of my chest
Can’t even catch my breath
I wish I was at peace
That would be the best way
To get over this mess
What did you think
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i like it. its utterly understandable.
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You have a very distinct style that stays consistant throughout all your writings. good job ^-^
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Great write man
This poems really hits home for me
you have AMAZING talent at writeing you gained a fan lol
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COOL
I feel the same here.I dont like my life and i belive no one understands me.
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i can relly relate to this,,
its so true,,
its awesome!!
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Beautiful rhythm
it was rawr, and strgiht thought nad feeling, no sugar coding
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wow
i think this poem is so true in evryway .
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bravo, this was well written, unlike most on this damned site, you can actually write a few lines.
KEM
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i don't wanna sound, idk, like i know exactly why you wrote this, but i feel for you, like, really.
i can imagine a guy sitting in a corner, biting his nails and looking at all the "normals" that pass by without noticing. feeling just so alone and out of place. it'll be ok though, cuz you probably are not as oblivious and ignorant as most of them are.
hope your scars heal.
loves,
kAsSiE
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Nice, I dig it man.
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This is a powerful piece. I was really struck by the severity of the despair this poem seems to convey. The work is stunning, the rhyme-sheme and centering somehow appropriate, but I still feel a little chilled...I hope this isn't from personal experience.
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I feel like that too...
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no really amazing
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amazing
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i know death can seem like the easiest way to solve problems... but the consequences would be terrible... just look at all the comments you have on this poem... all these people who's lives you have lightened just by sharing your writing talent with them.
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wow this is amazin and a hot guy like you shouldnt be sad... there are lots of girls who im sure would want to cheer you up who have been through the same *wink wink* hehe x
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amazing. very intense...great job.
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this is freaking amazing. I super love it! sorry you hurt.
smiles,
-Emm
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LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
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wow
this was an intense write. the emotions you put into this poem was powerful, very well penned
great write
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Oh this lovely.
Full of emotion, strewn together quite nicely.
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Invisible
Cool verse bro
Im chatting to a bird called XneverXgoodXenoughX: She 2 years down from you. so you two may get on a treet. give her a go. -
LOve it :D
But don't see being different as a bad thing. Wear it with pride, the fact that no one can be quite like you I know what it's like to hide something or pretty much everything from the world...find a friend and tell them everything..it helps to share what you feel. YOu don't feel so lost then even if they don't understand they know and they will be there for you.
Nessa
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i know what this is like more than i'd like to..... great job!
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this was really good shaant. I don't really know what else to say, except its good that your getting those emotions out. Its not good to keep them bottled up.
Kaycee
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This is well written... and I dont really wanna say anythign else about it :/
I love you
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