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Memories of You

Holding hands
Warm and soft like cookies
We burned
From dancing too long

Nervous and not knowing
What to expect
From such a smile
But I'll trust it

And that's the way I loved you

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Title: Memories of You
Username: DeadlyTurnip

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  • riasme
    February 25
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    how cute! I have a new favorite analogy: warm and soft like cookies. nice, very well-written


  • AnarchistXxXLove
    February 23
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    Wow amazing write, very well done


  • BonaFidePoet
    February 23
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    <3


  • sophia moonfairy
    February 22

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    Wow, you are only thirteen and write like this?! oh my goodness this is amazing. I really like this a lot. You did great on the flow and rhyme. This write is beauty and very sweet. Very creative with the cookie part. I thought it was cute and I like it Because cookies are my favorite. My favorite part in the poem is

    " What to expect
    From such a smile
    But I'll trust it

    And that's the way I loved you"

    That left me in Awe. you did beautifully in them. I want to thank you for taking your time and entering nicely done with the title. good luck in the contest.

    - xXGreenemoBabyxX ♥