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A Visit From Heaven

"As I walk down the golden road,
I smile at all of my memories.
All the laughs,
All of the smiles.
I can't help but think of you. "

We had lots of good times.
We played sports,
and played with the puppies.
We loved being outside under the sun..
I used to look up and wonder,
But now I know.

Don't be afraid,
I never leave your side,
Though you can't see me.
I sing with you in church,
Though you can't hear me.
I ride on my very own crochrocket,
Right beside you.
Don't cry,
I'm always resting on your shoulder.
Don't hurt,
I'm always there to ease the pain.

"I'm almost at the golden gates!
Everyone is there to greet me.
As I will be for you."

Remember me,
For the good not the bad.
Remember our laughs,
Our smiles.

Just smile,
and know that I never left.

"Hello everyone! Mr. Jesus Sir, Please, Can you carry Michael home?.."


Author notes

Note to the brother:
I know how you feel at this sad moment in your life. But you must with all your heart, look through all the pain into his giving light. Austin will forever look over you, as all of our loved ones who have been called home. Allow him to be the light at the end of the tunnel, and never loose faith. The pain is temporary but he will never fade. My wishes and prayers are out to you during this time. Don't loose hope or faith.

This poem is dedicated to Austin who died prematurely. May the good Lord hold him in his arms until he may be reunited with his loved ones.

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  • JessTheRentyMess
    February 23
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    Thank you Ray. I really hope this helps. Excuse it being so...messy. I'm a little scattered brained and confused at this time as well.


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    February 22

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    Thank you for your dedication and kind words. Michael will appreciate them very much and I look forward to adding this piece to the contest.