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Closer

Her cherry-strawberry-apple tinted chapstick
Flavored as well?
          He imagines


Eyes like the heart of winter in a drop of rain
          Keep her close
Aura like molten sunshine encases
Arms like pure, fresh-silk brush
Words like spoken song and transformed laughter
          Dare her closer

Author notes

Just feel like writing a lot today ^-^ Inspired by a picture called "Closer" that was drawn by a person who calls herself "Ronigirl" over on deviantart. If you've been over my house you've probably seen it-I have it taped to the wall

And I realize that it really doesn't flow at all. If you would be so kind as to provide suggestions for that I would be honored!

(This is me working out my sorry imagery muscle)

Hope you like it

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  • keenan7
    February 22

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    very intimate, and the writing is, excellent. This is a piece I can read over and over. KUDOS
    -keenan