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Doorsteps

When you got there
you thought you would
not come back
Hope you lacked
In the dark, red dots
streaming fast
Thoughts of young love
you thought would last
Coming home seemed
so far away
Deaths doorstep at
your feet every day
Time went fast, like
you never thought it would
Soon you would be home
At the doorsteps you stood...

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  • suzannecas
    June 22
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    I read it and I think it is really good.

  • hemingway
    April 7
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    Why not applaud my own work.I think it was good.NO one else has even read it.

  • hemingway
    April 7
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    Very good

    This is a good poem,if i have to say so myself