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Trying to remain in controle

What can I do to inspire
Your fire
To burn with mine
For those nights
Alone I reside
Contimplating
How to arouse
The curiousity
Of one-ness
Just you and me
What can I do
To make you want me
Like I want you
For I feel like begging you
And you know I have tried
What does it take
For you to feel the same need
While colours collide
Exploding within me
My strength now known
Along with the hunger for you
While you sit there not knowing
That I am dying within my own silence
I speak up and you say another time
And here still I remain
Trying to be kind to your wishes
As months go by
I still wonder
What can I do
To ignite your fire
As passions linger
While I hide in a hole
Of self
Trying to remain in controle

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  • HaleyMary
    March 27
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    Powerful write, Benji. Lots of emotion expressed in this piece. I especially liked the line of dying in your own silence. That part seemed so powerful. And, it makes me think of how silence can be a terrible thing if people don't choose to speak up about stuff that's bothering them. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.

    Haley Mary