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Terrace

Upon the terrace she sits in wait,
To see the sun shine upon the day,
She watches the sunrise every morn,
It warms her as it chases the storms.
She opens her eyes to see beauty,
Bright red and orange rising,
Into the sky,
Full of light,
And warmth that chases away,
The cold of night.

Author notes

I was picturing a woman sitting upon her terrace in one of those Trillion $ Homes. I was imagining what she would enjoy seeing from her terrace and a sunrise came to mind.

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  • The Fun House silver member
    February 22

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    I can imaginine such a lovely sunrise seeing this. I think it is an inviting piece. I would have liked to see a bit more expansion on the scenery and woman surrounding it, but the sunrise is lovely


  • GeorgiaRain
    February 22
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    This is wonderful! So vivid and the imagery is great! Good write! I am so glad I read this!