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Family Garden

Lying with the shadows under a tree
Sits a boy who is happy as can be
He sits there thinking of his family
The fun they have drinking cups of tea
They drink tea in their beautiful garden
Playing hide and seek between the flowers
There they feel safe, like no one can harm them
Games keep them entertained for hours
Oh this paradise among the roses
Each flower bed holds something superb
Many flowers’ smells tickle their noses
They smell the aroma of each fresh herb
Then the clouds come to cover up the sky
To the garden the family says goodbye

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  • Chet W.
    March 14
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    Daniel should be very happy, you wrote him a nice poem