There’s silence in the snow
A safe haven for thoughts unwilling to be thought out loud
A small place in the world where nothing matters
But everything changes
It’s a small easing into cold
Death wrapped so beautifully
That you don’t want to rip the packaging
A clever design of wit and cunning
Snow mesmerizes in its flight
Unlike rain’s noisy descent to distract
A beautiful escape, a sly caging of the mind
A compelling argument to submit to beauty
How grotesque the outcome may be
But the journey there is peaceful
A littering of snowflakes
A silent transcending of understanding
Please tell me what you think
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'There’s silence in the snow' - I really like the first line. It's very inviting, if that makes sense. It just made me want to read more.
'It’s a small easing into cold
Death wrapped so beautifully
That you don’t want to rip the packaging' - Beautiful.
I love how soft this piece is. It's peaceful and mysterious in a way. Amazing job.
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Thank you. I appreciate it.
I'm glad you were able to pick up on how I wanted it to come off... soft enchantment, sorta. Just like the snow.
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