Swindling serpentine Savages!
What are you doing to these people?!
Have you no heart? No feeling?
Nothing?
Open your eyes,
they too are humans
but you, you are not!
You are Savages!
Ruthless, unyielding, unfeeling Savages!
By: Nada Adel Sobhi
Author notes
Inspired by what the Israelis have been doing to Palestine, recently and over the years.
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 LINES or Less (S) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended March 21, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very emotional write, with lots of feelings. Unfortunately, there is error on both sides.
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that is a great write and a very interesting well i cant think of the word for it heh but either way i rather like it that sounds a lot like how you've described things in Palestine though it is an artistic way of putting your feelings on the whole situation.
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Good write. The political take on it is okay, although it's a poem that could be addressed to both sides. You may or may not agree. Personally I think the current war between Palestine and Israel is about nothing more than political gain on both sides. All the fighting seemed to die down shortly after election time over there. It's a shame society can not live these days without attacking one another, but that is how we live now and it is what we must get used to because it will never go away, it was Iran and the US, then Palestine and Israel, S & N Korea, it never changes.
Anyways, enough political rambling, the poem was great. I love the way it was written. Good luck in the contest. -
Wow! I heard that!
You did a great job saying this with force and few lines. I do believe this poem could apply to any sort of serpent savages on the planet. Heartless people abound on earth and this poem...yes, it is to them all I think. Great one.
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