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(hell)o

crucified by conclusions
not safe within delusions
i chose to surrender  


critically ill with invisible drip
over dim purpose never gains grip


not evil enough to share this poison
i hold this spreading cancer inside me
and give fake smiles for everyone to see
 
 
 
 

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  • stargardt13
    February 23

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    I loved the pun you used in your title. It's very creative. The imagery in this poem was very powerful along with you impressive emotions. Thanks for sharing this poem with me and entering it in my contest.


  • geckogirl silver member
    February 22
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    deep, dark, powerful point. good luck Markie in contest


  • maralisa silver member
    February 22

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    aw this is deep and a very powerful poem your imagery and depth resinate dark emotions throughout good luck in the contestmaralisa