Does anybody whisper?
Does anybody cheer?
Is there anything around
For anyone to hear?
It seems to be so quiet.
It seems there is no fear.
Everything surrounding me
Is silent, sweet, and clear.
Author notes
23. What would happen if time stopped?
52. Make It rhyme and one of the above options.
-WhiteAngelCake
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I don't think it's that great, but I hope you enjoyed it. :)
Comments
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I did actually...
It isn't that long and probably not your best work, but somehow there's something deep in it. You have certainly given the topic a thought.
Thank you.
Joey
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i wish my life was like that!!! i really do mean it!!!! xD it would be sooo aweomse. x)
this is a really nice write heather!! ^.^
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Great piece. Though it would be weird if time just stopped... Might give us all time to think... Well written; God bless.
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Hey this is great. What would happen if time did actually stop? Plehaps there would be an overwhelming silence. If time stopped and the earth stopped spilling we would all fall off and then what? Grat poem for thought.
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