for years i've wanted out
from the dark thought
actions
that never stop
someone help me
i want out
of what i cant control
my life speeding forward
out of control careening
of the track
i want out
My life being batterd
distroyed
i want out
the pain
hurt
my life
i want out
of what i cant control
my life seems to fly
away from me
i want out
ill never get out
no one ever does
i want out
of the thoughts
actions
harming myself
I want out of it all
i want out
of the cuts
brusies
pain
i want out
someone help me
i want out now
I WANT OUT!!
of my anguised cries
no one hears
the tears no one sees
the pain no one feels but me
i want out
of the tears
i want out of it all
i want out
A contest entry
- Dark, cutting, suicide, sadness, depression by stargardt13.
700 points, ended February 28, 2009, 52 entries
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Comments
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Good poem. I definitly understand the feeling of wanting out of everything you described in your poem. The only suggestion i have for you is add a few letters that i think you forgot and check to make sure you spelled everything correctly. Other than that, this was a great poem. I enjoyed reading it very much.
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Im sorry. I know. Great write. I bet many can relate. Good luck in the contest
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