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Sticks and stones
Cause broken bones
And words will
Always kill me
Voices rage
And days go by
With nothing but
Sad goodbyes
Giving up
And giving in
Is all I have to do
Letting go
Is all I have ever known
So I'm letting go
Tonight

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  • MusicIsMyLifeline
    February 22, 2009

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    didnt i already tell u to stop writing AWESOMALAMAZINGFANFUCKINGTASTIC poems?
    ur makin me look bad! especially with this writersblock i have. lolz. i think this is in my top 5 faves of ur poems. very good job.