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Soldiers Companion

I wish someone would care

I really wish I wasn’t here

I wish I didn’t care

About you

But something caught my eye

And now no matter how hard I try

I can’t stop thinking about you

Since the day you left for war

Everyone calls me a whore

Cause I kissed another guy

I know you’ve kissed other girls

You aren’t that faithful

I want to put a gun to my head

Maybe I’d be better off dead

Lying in some cold icy bed

Now that you’re gone

I’m withering away

I don’t want to feel another day

Without you by my side

I just become another star at night.

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  • Commonsuicide
    February 23
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    excellent


  • Lexie
    February 22

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    wow, the life of a soldiers companion must be hard, and life for the soldier is obviously hard. love it. great job.

    Now that you’re gone

    I’m withering away

    I don’t want to feel another day


    amazing =]


  • Strify
    February 22
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    Amazing! Very realistic. Love it!

    Strify