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Distortions of Peril

Horrific blurs of terror
draw me into a dimension
of repulsion

I am face to face with the
darkness that holds my soul

Reflections of evil deeds
echoe off a tormenting
looking glass

Venting seeds of self loathing
within the abyss of my minds eye

As I try hard to keep it together
amidst disfigured images

Captured in the essence
of a defeated spirit

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  • Unsigned gold member
    March 2
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    I have a problem with this...

    I don't buy it..

    Thanks for the effort.

    Simon


  • snowbird600
    February 25
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    This is a very thoughtful write.
    The last 4 lines are favored.
    S-


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    February 23
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    very, very dark with a certain beauty in that darkness.

    Reflections of evil deeds echoe off a tormenting looking glass echo

    thank you for sharing this with me today and i am wishing you the best of luck in this contest that you have entered. looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie


  • Myjoy gold member
    February 22
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    You are only defeated if you allow yourself to be. Till the day you take your last breath you can say today I make a change. Today I am me, better, stonger, wiser. We all have a past, but it is what makes us. Do not let life break you, we are not here to live a life full of pain......well done. I love dark poetry.