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Movement Of Breath

Shadows have voices;
I hear them--
in the movement of breath,
as it curls under words and sighs.

Tongue, tasting the past-- 
upon the salty flesh of memory,
thirstily devouring--
apparitions of self;

Mind caught--
amidst the twilight of truth,
as it creeps like age
upon the ignorance of youth.

And I am what once was,
conjoined with what is.

Twinned refractions--
contorted within the depths
of deepest reflection.

Until each twisted image
welcomes the other, soothed within
inner eye's mirrored acceptance...
 
 






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“One does not meet oneself until one catches the reflection from an eye other than human.”
~ Loren Eiseley

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  • blondone
    March 13

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    Oh oh so true this is one of my biggest wonders ever cause I am so sure my own reflection is so different then others see me...deep and full of emotions that are seeded I think inside all of us

    this write shows off that poetry talent...


  • Rowan gold member
    February 23
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    Stunning. Very reflective hon, congratulations.


  • poet2angels gold member
    February 23

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    Perfect piece of reflection and acceptance of oneself...

    "Until each twisted image
    welcomes the other, soothed within
    inner eye's mirrored acceptance... "

    Beautiful!

    Lynda


  • BehindTheShadow
    February 22
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    Nice piece!