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Truth hurts...

"Who is that?"
I say,
trying not
to show dismay...

Old, and wrinkled,
long gray hair,
deep into her eyes,
I stare...

She laughs at me
says..."this is the truth,
face it baby,
you've lost your youth"

I stare back,
with furrowed brow,
trying not to believe
somehow...

But she is right,
I must agree,
I am her,
and she is ME!

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  • Unsigned gold member
    March 2

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    lol...you have a way my friend...love this because it is the truth in simplicity...love it!

    Honest and, well...yeah I know how you feel some days.


    Thanks


    Loved it



  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    February 24

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    Oh wow!

    Isn't it funny how your face continues to change in the mirror, but it's not easy to place when and where every little change took place? I really love this write! Great job with it!


  • Callisto Athena gold member
    February 24
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    I loved this! It's so true, my mirror does not lie.. Well done..


  • aboomer silver member
    February 23
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    so true! that's why I don't look in mirrors....lol
    best wishes in the contest.


  • suseann
    February 23

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    Oh......the horrors of mirrors! I know what you mean. And mirrors can be mean and nothing if not truthful.

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