Loneliness
Embraces me.
While Sleep Waits to Take my Hand.
Dreams of you stand of the Cliff
of my Subconscious;
Threatening to Jump off
into the Darkness.
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A wonderful expression.
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haha i agree with...phantomsAngel...makes me think of bella.
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i feal the same.
i no exactly what yourr fealing coz im going threw it .
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keep on writing xx
broken harted girl xx
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Full of emotion, images and great depth.
nicely done!
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How intriguing; I love the imagery conveyed within this - makes me think of Bella
Great poem
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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This is a very powerful write. Emotional. Very sad. The imagery is really great. Love it
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Interesting.......
Sad poem.
It sounds like your lonely, and you're
ready to give up.
Don't jump, unless you have wings.
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very beautiful.
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beautiful I love it. I liked the line "loneliness embraces me" keep em comming
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