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Tears

.Shameful.
these little drops
of salt and sadness
.Hiding.
until in the dark
they can finally fall
.Pouring.
out everything
painful and ugly
.Emptying.
what was far
too full

.Wishing.
this was more
than a temporary
.Substitute.
for what I
desperately long for
.Pleading.
for relief
happiness, forgiveness
.Knowing.
that it will never come

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